I used to use Yahoo mailing all the time but now I have been primarily using VT's WebMail. Just like Yahoo, the university only allots each person 10 MB. Right now, not even after a full semester, I have a quota of over 404 percent. What's more, I have over 150 unread messages. As I found out while trying to sort through my inbox, one of those messages was the feedback on my essay. As I read over Mrs. Scott's comments, I was pleased to find out that she liked the tone and the structure. In addition, she also got the fact that I was letting out my frustrations at Tech through their idiotic policies.
However, I agree with her that the essay ends too arbitrarily and needs some work. I plan to include another section where I go through the outcome of my judicial review trial. What is also comforting to know is that I don't need to have some big revelation at the end of the essay. I am considering ending things on a more abstract note, such as my view of Virginia Tech after the trial. I have good expectations for my final draft.
Portfolio Draft
16 years ago
1 comment:
i didn't have a feedback sheet anyone one day so i have like 5 or 6 people's feedback in a notebook that i'm just now getting to people, so here's yours:
The site was pretty well organized. you really did have good points and facts. it's great that you could intermingle facts and opinions to try and persuade us why beamer should be fired, the ending could have used some help though....it just kinda ended abruptly...with no real conclusion...
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